Tuesday, May 26, 2020

Devotion & Betrayal




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  1. This story hits so hard for how the woman convincingly transforms the toilet. Innocent and sweet, yet using that against him. It just makes so much sense and fits in so well. Not only that, you completely turn it around and have the woman turn him into a men’s toilet! This just blew my mind. I can only wonder, did the toilet eventually take a liking towards men more than Alicia? This series really went all the way in the best possible fashion.

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    1. Both this one and last year’s Stuck in the Toilet-Zone were pretty heavily inspired by a conversation I had with an anonymous commenter on one of last year’s Soapbox posts. Stuck in the Toilet-Zone was inspired more by my half of the conversation, whereas Devotion & Betrayal was more inspired by his; I had a really good time writing both of them. Not sure if that anonymous commenter was you—I suspect it might’ve been—but if so, thanks for the inspiration!

      Unfortunately, no one will ever know whether this toilet ever learned to appreciate its new job in the men’s room. To everyone other than Alicia, it’s just a plain old toilet.

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  2. Great story, I love him being used by guys at the end. It just makes everything that much worse and humiliating! Would you ever include more guys into the mix? I've always liked the idea of misunderstanding, pervy guy thinks he's gonna be a girls ass/panties etc but instead her dad or boyfriend get in the way and is owned by an unaware male instead

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    1. Thanks for the kind words!

      Stories involving men are pretty rare for me, because femdom is mostly my whole thing. The few stories I have that do involve men (e.g. Bait & Switched, Fill Bill), or the threat of men (e.g. Dildo Bro), the focus is still on the fact that it was a domineering woman who gave the transformed person to a man, or otherwise cursed him to his fate of being humiliated and used by men.

      Another thing standing in the way of stories involving men is that I often look to my pornography collection/sources for inspiration, which naturally skews almost entirely to female subjects (if the labels hetero/homosexual even apply to someone with these weird as hell fetishes, I'm heterosexual). And it's funny how much more difficult it is to find photos of male subjects for these stories when I do decide to put a twist like this in there... I had originally planned to use a photo of an unpleasant man sitting on a toilet in a stall for the final page of this story, but ImageFap turned up nothing (I actually found some good, previously undiscovered sets of photos of WOMEN using toilets by searching for men using toilets, lol), and the results on Google were all stock photos covered in watermarks. That said, I quite like how the last page of this story ultimately turned out, anyway... by putting the toilet behind a closed stall door, it visually reinforces the fact that he is sealed in to his awful fate, imprisoned, and alone (in that nobody talks to him or even knows he's there).

      Anyway... I know I have multiple readers who have really enjoyed my few stories where the protagonist is used by men, so I'll keep that in mind when I dream up ideas!

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  3. Thank you for mentioning those stories, I wasn't aware those caption featured males or the threat of them. I understand where you're coming from, in terms of the femdom side of things, it would be strange to feature males. I just like the idea of misunderstanding or misiwsh leading a perv to be a male asshole. Tbh just the last image was needed that featured a guy just to let us know what his fate was going to be.

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    1. Which is to say I still really enjoyed the caption! I am Glad you're creating content again.

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